Aw man... you have no idea how bummed I was when I realized this song already had vocals. I'm loving the feel of it though. GREAT job with the intro. I was immediately pulled in. Also loved the break at 1:08 and outro. Would be 5 stars without the vocals. The quality of the voice and mixing is good, but I'm not crazy about the some of the verbiage and word placement.

Checking out your other music right now...
hopefully I can find something we can collaborate on?

Very Usher. Very Frankie J. Very good!
(4 stars only because of the roughness here)
Let me know if you need someone to fill a verse. You're stuff is great.

Woah buddy...
I know there aren't too many voices here on NG, but this is by FAR the best I've heard. This song is amazing. Such a good texture in the voice (I don't know if it's yours). The tone of the vocals along with the music and lyrics stays really in sync emotionally. I know you already know based on the previous comments and many downloads, but this is just great. I love the back and forth at 1:04 (the female voice has a cool effect on it too). The music is really simple and mellow in a way that leaves room for the vocals. Congrats on a great track. Good luck to you!